Wednesday, 3 June 2020

All about me

We were learning about making sure our online information is not private stuff.
I found it hard to make the shapes.
I found it easy to color the caricter.
Next time I will try Improve my comments.   

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13 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 June 2020 at 13:37

    Hi Ollie,
    I like your illistration, it looks alot like you. Maybe next time you could add your shoulders in your illistration as well?
    From Hannah

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  2. Anonymous3 June 2020 at 13:40

    Hi Ollie,
    I reall like the polyline of your face. Maybe next time you could polyline your body aswell.

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  3. Anonymous3 June 2020 at 13:52

    Hi Ollie,
    I really like your polyline for your face, maybe next time make it more advanced such as adding your body.
    From Nina

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  4. Anonymous4 June 2020 at 10:51

    Kia ora Ollie. My name is Daniel and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love the polylining of your face but next time add your shoulders and body. (Also your description is spot on.)

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  5. Anonymous4 June 2020 at 12:41


    Kia ora. My name is Katana and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I love your digital picture of yourself!But next time make sure you add a body and a neck (you probably didn't have enough time)But other than that i love it!

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    1. Anonymous8 June 2020 at 17:43

      Ok thanks maybe you could add your blog for me to see.

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  6. Herman @ Manaiakalani8 June 2020 at 11:57

    Kia ora Ollie. This is Mr Fourie and I am working with Makauri School's Room 2. We really liked the way you did your hair. It had lots of detail in it. We also made an About Me Avatar. The hardest part for us was making the nose not look weird! A good idea to help improve your writing is to use capital letters and to add more detail to your description. Max was upset that you didn't mention him! Lekker dag. Room 2 @Makauri and Mr Fourie.

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    1. Anonymous10 June 2020 at 10:05

      I finshed what you said do you have any more feedback. could you please send me the makauri blog links so I could help them improve.

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  7. Anonymous8 June 2020 at 17:42

    Ok thanks I'll work on that punturion.

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