Friday, 8 June 2018
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My name is Ollie. I live in Tairawhiti. I like to play sport. My biggest dream is to be a Black Stick. In the weekend I like to go and jump off the train bridge. My goals in Writing are punctuation, better range , and spelling. I'm good at organisation and vocabulary in writing. P.E is my strength. I am good at reading and maths. I am loud and eager to learn. I am looking forward to finding out how constructing my outer ear is going to work and look. My biggest achievement is getting gold at a hockey tournament down in Napier. I look up to the Black Sticks.
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Looks great Ollie. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I am Liana from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you put in a lot of detail in your writing.
I learnt that you want to become a black stick which just so happens to be my dream too!
Maybe you could explain what part of maths your good at e.g volume, area, multiplication, statistic?
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://matawailianar.blogspot.com/
Mā te wā
Liana
ReplyDeleteThank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - I liked your detailed comment
Thoughtful - know you read it do you like hokey?
Im good at most of those.
I love hockey! I've played it since I was 6, I'm 10 now, and I can't remember life without it!
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